Shocked, she looked down for a moment and then looked up, directly at me. Her large hazel brown eyes were looking through me with full intensity. Her eyelashes were dripped with the fresh tears she was trying to hide.
Her face had an expression of raw rage but her eyes though moist was eerily calm.She looked into my eyes for few seconds but it felt like an eternity. And eventually she smirked, followed by a chuckle.
Finally she released me from her intense gaze and turned around and left, and never looked back.
She never came back, never looked at me again,never spoke a single word. The night I hit her that was the last I saw of her.
But those intense eyes of her is still very much fresh in my mind. Telling me every day that “ You can no longer call yourself a man ”.
Hearts and Minds 
Any man who strikes a woman surrenders his manhood. Period.
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Thanks John. Glad you liked it.
P.s. (Replying again as somehow all the replies from my end have got deleted!!)
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Such a well written story. A man cannot be called a man, if by force he/she handles the weak. Domestic violence is an ugly truth every where around the world. Glad you could bring this up.
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Thanks Harsh. Glad you liked it.
P.s. (Replying again as somehow all the replies from my end have got deleted!!)
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Oh, no problem. Have a great day. 😇
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That’s some intense work! Very beautiful written!!
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Thank you so much
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Very well written!!!
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Thank you Era. Really happy you liked it.
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😊😊
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OOH, I liked that great message at the end. Good job!
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Thank you much Cindy for your kind words.
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You’re welcome! Kindness well deserved !
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💛💛💛
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beautifully written ❤
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Thsnk you Sara
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Thank you ❤️
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Love that you ended it in a sword stroke lopping off the head rather than an apology. No victims here. Simply the vigilante justice of Nature herself. Big !!!! To that. 🙂
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Thanks Jordan for summing this up in such a beautiful way. Really happy you liked it.
P.s. (Replying again as somehow all the replies from my end have got deleted!!)
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You’re most welcome Thegirlwithapuzzledmind. 🙂 It’s such a great piece.
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Strange WordPress glitch? Glad you responded again so your comment stayed.
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Yeah it was some strange WP problem. But thankfully its working fine now.
Thanks for your kind response.
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That’s good to hear.
You’re most welcome.
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Well penned!!
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Very intense, this stayed on for a long time!! Very well written..
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Thank you Deepak. Really happy you liked it.☺️
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Mood Refresher!!😀😀
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Haha..thank you.
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Great 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Thanks Ashee
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Deep emotions very well expressed, Yeshu!!💫
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Thank you so much Chetna. ❤️ Really happy you liked this.
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You are so welcome. It was awesome!
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Powerful! Condensed with just a few words but told a longer story. Well done!
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Thanks. Appreciate you support.
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This was very nicely expressed! It kept me the whole way through.
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Thank you very much. Glad you liked it.
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Eyes speak a lot 👁️
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And sometimes convey more than words.
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You are right 👍
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An unsaid truth intensely penned👏💜
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Thank you. Really appreciate you taking out time and going through it.
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😊
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Nicely written 👌👌♥️
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Thank you ❤️
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Your blog is very significant and impressive. I am nominating gou for Liebster Award.👍 My link is 👇
http://tarapant.com/2020/08/09/nominated-for-liebster-award/
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Very relevant and well put up.
She bloomed in his arms,
Clasped in his care,
Till the day
She was perished by a slap,
Broken by the rage,
Till then she bowed in respect
Now she vowed to pick up whats left
And toe his door,
To never return…
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This is wow. So beautifully you have summed up this post.
Loved this.
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Thanks. Putting it as a post on blog.
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Published 😁
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Haha. Yeah just saw. Its real good
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Thanks. I like poetry jamming
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The agony of a woman, who has been trampled upon by brute force, has been captured well in a few telling lines. It’s sad that men often resort to physically dominate women in this day and age.
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Sad reality of our society.
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Enveloped in her silent rage,
The silent sufferer isn’t weak.
She’s like a bird in a cage,
Her fortitude is divine and mystique!
Sometimes silence makes a louder statement than venomous words. I feel sad how our society treats women not giving the respect they deserve. Wonderful post indeed!
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Thanks for you kind words. You summed up this post in an amazing way.
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My my… So very well written.
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Thank you so much for your support. Glad you liked it.
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Did I tell you that you have been nominated for the Ideal Inspirational Blogger Award ??
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I have no idea Dakshali. You can share me the link. I am not much into awards post but I will definitely revert you the answers in mail.
Hope thats ok with you.
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Oh..it’s fine…If you are okay with accepting it…then you can mail me…either it’s not so much necessity to do…
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Please share me the link and mail id, i will gladly do it.
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https://poetrylance.wordpress.com/2020/08/11/ideal-inspirational-blogger-award/?preview=true
And my email id is dakshali27@gmail.com.
Thank you :)))
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Thank you. I will check and revert you in some time
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Sure dear!
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Have send you the reply. Please do check whenever you are free.
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Hey, I have checked your mail..and have replied to it.🙂
Thank you so much for your concern :))😚
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Pleasure meeting you.
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Me too :))😚
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Domestic violence is the harsh reality of our society. You presented this in a very poignant manner. Excellent writing!
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Thanks Rishika. Really glad you found it relevant.
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Do you really read all ma stuff 🤔
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Hahahh.. you doubt that?
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Naa. I doubt my words are really interest 😂
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Lol.. i must say you underestimate yourself 😂
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Haha
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I absolutely loved it!
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Thanks Rashmi. Glad you liked it.
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Powerful💗💗 loved it
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Thanks Vani. Really happy you liked it.
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Strike to the ego is more painful than physical pain. Well written 👍🏻
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Thanks for stopping by. Glad you liked it 💜
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Powerful words
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Thanks Suzanne. Happy you liked it.
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Once released, the effects of violence can never be recalled.
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Exactly. It can never be undone.
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Beautiful
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Thank you so much.
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Brilliantly written. Loved it.
Looking forward to reading more! 😁🖤
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Thank you so much. Really glad you liked it.
Many more to come hopefully 😉 💜
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👍🖤
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An intense emotion very aptly wrapped in lucid words, sometimes no reaction is the best action could be done, really nice article Yeshu!!
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Thanks Shashank. Actually at times its better to do things than to say it.
Glad you find this relevant.
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The pleasure is mine 🙂
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Wow
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Thanks
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