It’s all blur, it’s crowded.
Everyone has a voice
And every voice is saying something.
Some are shouting
Some are whispering
Some are talking
All at the same time.
It’s difficult to concentrate on one voice.
I tried hard to listen to them
To understand what’s happening
But I can only hear the voice, not the words.
Suddenly anxiety took over me.
I thought to close my eyes and calm myself
I shut my eyes tight to not get distracted by these voices.
But as soon as I close my eyes, I realized
This chaos is inside me.
Those blurred faces, their vibrant clothes
And those deep dark voices
They are all inside me
All the time.
Those voices are louder now
Screaming
Talking
Whispering
Chanting
Still making no sense.
I am terrified.
I am tired.
I want to scream.
And I want to sleep.
I wish they fade out
But it’s going to stay.
I wish I could shut them out
But there’s no escape.
Such a sad poem, very poignant and true
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Thanks. Glad you liked it.
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Wow!! Loved the use of voices here! And so true, it’s some inner voices that I need an escape from
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We all need an escape from those voices at times.
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This is amazing. You captured that feeling of chaos so well. There are so many voices within us, and it’s definitely so hard to quiet them sometimes. Amazing job, and I hope you are able to find peace! 👏❤
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Thanks Wardah. Its always a delight to read your comments.
I hope the same for you ❤️
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You’re welcome!! I hope so too ❤❤
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Beautiful and poignant. ❣️ I hope you will get through this soon 👍 I could very much relate to this.
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Thank you so much. Glad you find this piece relevant and relatable ❤️
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Beautiful. It captured the essence so well!❤
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Thanks Nawazish. ❤️
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Excellent👏👏👏
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Thanks Vani. Glad you liked it.
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Oh great job here Yeshu! Love how you captured the feeling of being hijacked by ones voices inside. Powerful words.. we sure can’t listen to our mind that rattles on or we’d be a tongue tied, anxiety ridden mess! ❤️🤗❤️ love and hugs!
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Thanks for your lovely comment Cindy. Too many thoughts often lead to chaos and anxiety. But at times we lose control of our mind. And thats where the problem starts. Glad you liked this piece ❤️
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You’re sooo welcome! That is so true and you described it perfectly! Bravo👏👏👏👏👏❤️
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Beautiful. 😇
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Thanks Harsh
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Yeshu, very relatable poem. This is how if feels when I have insomnia…mind won’t quit! Often it’s words to a poem that are the “voices in my head.” I get up and write. 🙂
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Thanks Cheryl. Thats actually a great idea to write those voices. It should work like a therapy.
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I know the escape.
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Please tell me how
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It’s a way a whole new way to listen.
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I am curious now
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Very well written!!
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Thanks Deepak.
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Beautifully written Yeshu 🙂 have great weekend 🍕🏠🎉 🙂💐
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Thanks you so much Shashank. You too have a great day ahead.
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Quite relatable. You have written it so beautifully. Loved it. 😊
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Thank you so much Sonali. Glad you liked it.
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Relatable I agree, sometimes we wanna shut everything and run. I practice it so often.
I loved a few lines a lot-
“And those deep dark voices
They are all inside me
All the time.
Those voices are louder now
Screaming
Talking
Whispering
Chanting
Still making no sense.”
A lot of meaning and a lot of relatability in the lines.
How I so missed reading you, I am glad to read something so beautiful ✨
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I always love to know your thoughts. And I specially love it when someone tells me there favourite line of the post. You just brought a smile on my face🤗
I love this shining stars you put at the end
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My day’s spent well if I make a loved one smile💛
When words fail, I want people to know my heart smiles like those stars while I speak to them or read their work ✨
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Thats why i like you so much…what a beautiful thought 🤗
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Wow! This is amazing!
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Thanks Rishika 💛
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Hugs. I felt like the person needs a comfortable hug.
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I am sure this person won’t mind a warm embrace 💛
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Loads of hugs (Hearts)
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Loved the poem. 🤜🤛 So well put out, the chaos within. Got me thinking. An awesome piece of writing, Yeshu. 👏👏🍀
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Thankx Sundaram. Glad you find it relevant.🤜🤛
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Words out are healing onto the page ! Eco 🌱
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Hey..thanks for dropping by.
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The demons always come out at night. Each of us has to find our own way to quiet them down, but none of us need do that alone. Be well.
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True each has their own way. Thanks for your kind words.
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Intense and deeply moving…nicely expressed…
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Thanks Piyush. Glad you liked it.
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Nice blog
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Thanks
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Please read my post
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Beautifully written. The mind, after all is the devil’s workshop!
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Aahh i love this comment. So accurately you summed up this post.
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Ha ha! Thank you 🙂
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