Secret wishes and hypnotic depths
Lonely wind and a storm on way
Flowing water and crashing wave
Mysterious eyes and fire and flame
A radiant sunshine and a cloud grey
A nightmare and a sweet dream play
A lively soul and a dreadful decay
Its all extreme and nothing halfway
Beautiful promise and a ugly fray
A silent prayer and a sword to slay
Visious war and a dance of ballet
Scorpion sting and a heart of clay
Be cautious of what you convey
She is not as easy as a child’s play
Carrying the emotions of all array
She can be a fairy and your doomsday.
Beautiful play of words π
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Thanks Ashish. Glad you liked it π€
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My pleasure! ππ€
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This is amazing, my dear friend! I absolutely love it, such beautiful writing!!! I especially love the third stanza…the dreamy flow is impeccable ππ». Well done π€π€
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Thank you so much Ace. Glad you enjoyed this post. Third stanza is my favourite too. β€οΈβ€οΈ
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She can be a fairy and your doomsday, my new favorite line β€β€β€
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Thanks Vani. Its so good to know you love how I ended it. β€οΈ
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The poem is soo nice. I loved the third stanzaπ€©π€©
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Thank you so much Nawazish β€οΈ
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Very beautiful! Loved the ending! π»πΉ
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Thanks Diana. Glad you like it.π€
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Lovely! πΉβ€οΈ
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Thank you π€βΊοΈ
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Ahhh I left a comment here!! Did it not go through?!? π¬
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Checked. It was in spam. Don’t know why? Weird WordPress.
Thank you so much for your kibd comment.
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Thatβs so weird! WP sometimes ππ€¦πΌββοΈ. Thank you so much for finding it, and of course, I mean every word π€π€
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Thanks for all your support. You know you are awesome. Right!
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Awwww βΊοΈ, Iβm so touched…big smiles ππ. Itβs your awesomeness that shines so bright!!!!!!!! π€
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Absolutely beautiful!β€οΈ
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Thank you so much. Glad you liked it β€οΈ
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My pleasure.π
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Yeshu, Gorgeous poem! It reminds me of a saying of the feminist movement that was popular when I was young, “Never underestimate the power of a woman!”
What do men see when they look at a woman? Thankfully, most men know we are human beings with an intellectual and an emotional capacity similar to their own. A few out there may still see a stereotype who is there only to please them. Your poem is a fair warning to men who would take women for granted. π
Have a great weekend!
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Thanks Cheryl for such a wonderful comment. You are right its wrong to stereotype any gender. Every person is different and especially in the case of women they are so unpredictable specially when someone cross them in a wrong way.
Glad you find this post relevant. You too have an awesome weekend ahead β€οΈ
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Sheβs quite complicated
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I loved how aptly you summed her up
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I took the easy way
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I love the contrasting elements. Beautifully written π
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Thank you so much Shweta. I really wanted to bring out the contrasting characters in one’s personality. Glad you liked it.π€
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And you definitely succeeded. You’re very welcome π
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Well penned poem!
Happy weekend!!
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Thank you so much Debasis.
Hope you have a great weekend too.
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π me too having great time this weekend.
Thank you!
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Pretty girl with the most beautiful mind shall always be a fairy and shall keep on spreading her smiles like sunshine ππ€
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Your words means a lot. I too hope the same ππ€π€
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Oh my God, did I just read Yeshu describing her own self, sting of Scorpio but heart of clay.
All those paradoxical references about this woman makes the poem such a beautiful read!
Enjoyed each and every bit of it Yeshu. Absolutely beautiful β€οΈ
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Hahaha. I knew you will get this. I had full faith in you and here you are.β€οΈβ€οΈ. I am so happy you get the reference. As far as I know you, this post and that line describes you too in some way.
Its always so good to hear from you. Thank you so much Rashmiii π€
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The play of words, the rhyme and the emotions, are all so perfect. Lovely write β£οΈ
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Thanks Radhika. Through this post I just wanted to highlight the contrasting elements in one’s personality. Glad you liked itβ€οΈ
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Beautifully written… every line was a poem in itself !! π
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That means a lot. Thank you so much Akriti β€οΈπ€
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beautifully written, did u purposely avoided ending the first three lines with a ‘y’, the poem is a pleasurable read!
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Hey.. thanks Deepak. Glad you noticed that. Honestly I wrote that first para way back.. yesterday I just continued the same and somehow unknowingly the rest three para ended up with βyβ. I was thinking to edit and write the first stanza again but I was too tired. So I posted it ππ
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ohhk…its always tough picking up thoughts when we continue an old piece, kudos to u for stitching it all so amazingly well!!
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ThanksβΊοΈβΊοΈ
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She certainly is not. Beautiful flow of words. Articulation is amazing.
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Thank you so much Kritika
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Welcome π
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Fair warning and great poem Yeshu of ryhmme and reason so well deliveredβ£οΈπππππ
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Thanks Cindy its always so good to know your thoughts β€οΈπ€
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Pleasure always Yeshuβ€οΈ
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A silent prayer and sword to slay, yeah tit for tat is the best way to deal, very apt writing ππ
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Thanks Shashank. It all depends on the way one treat the other.
Glad you liked it.
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I came across your blog just a few hours back and all I gotta say is.. you are a talented writer! Your words tell an absolutely interesting tale. I loved this one as well!
Love your blog!! Keep writing such beautiful content!
Regards
Aathmana
_Read. Love. Live.
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Thanks you so much for such a kind comment. Your words meant a lot. Really happy that you liked the blogs and the post here. Thanks again β€οΈπ€
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Your poetry actually reminds me of Robert Frost. I love how nature and human nature are often themes in your writing and your rhyme, rhythym, and structure are always King π Your writing is unique and you are clearly extremely talented. Never stop pouring your soul out through words.
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Wow. You really made my day. I have read Robert Frost a lot so may be though unaware by poetry might be inspired by him.
Thank you so much for such beautiful comment. You literally put a smile on my face π€
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absolutely beautiful ππ
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Thank you so much π€
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The poem is soo nice.π
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Thank you. Glad you liked it.
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It’d captured me all over, can’t take my eyes off it. Just fabulous ππ
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Beautiful writing… The rhythm and everything is so smooth which makes it a beautiful read… The below extract is a good reminder for many…
“Be cautious of what you convey”
Very well penned… Liked it… π
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Hey there!!! Iβm just checking in to let you know I nominated you for The Aesthete Blogger Award. You absolutely deserve it! No worries if your site is award free, just wanted to share your beautiful work and how much I appreciate you!!!! Much love, my friend π€π€ -Ace
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Beautiful!β€οΈ
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Such a wonderful poemπ
The two sides of the world
Two sides of women
As they say in China, yin, and yang. The contrast and opposing forces are complementary, interconnected, and interdependent in the natural world
And both sides are necessary to keep the world alive
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