A lone candle is shining
In a long dark room.
Melting in its own warmth,
Flickering in the gentle breeze.
A lone candle is shining
Soft at first, then bright with time
In the deep thick darkness,
It provides the only sight.
A lone candle is shining
Enchanting the shadows to come alive,
The air smells forbidden now
For the shadows will dance tonight.
A lone candle is shining
Writing its stories with its own wax,
No one will otherwise know
The tale of its burning life.
A lone candle is shining
Melting, bending and dying,
The darkness is creeping up now,
Bored by this feeble fight.
A lone candle is no longer shining
Burned out till the end of its wick
The darkness reign again,
But the melted candle sings the story of light.
I loved the 4th stanza and the last line of the poem is so apt finishing of the poem! Darkness and light go hand in hand
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Thanks Nawazish. 3rd one is my favourite. And you are right they go hand in hand. As there will be no existence of the one without the other.
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The love of light and dark…they’ll never meet at the same time ever😅
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Wow. Now that’s a poetic comment. Loved it.❤️
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🙈🙈
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You have weaved poetry out of something as simple as a candle. Beautifully written
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Saying the person who writes amazing posts on the most random things.
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That’s so sweet of you 😻❤️
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❤️❤️
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Gradual chaos. Love it.
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Thanks Bharath
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Welcome, Yeshu.
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The last line😍
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Thanks Akshita..glad you liked it
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Wonderfully written, every word and stanza looks perfectly placed!! 👏👍
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Thanks Deepak. Your words always means a lot.
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Wow! Sometimes happy endings are best left out of the door.
The story of light is simple, yet elegant. As they say, humans might light up the earth, but the deep space is dark!
We have the ambition to light up the space. Just like the candle had!
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Thanks Mayank. You are right its all about the ambition and effort.
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such a wonderful wow Yesu of light shining bright even when it’s turned out.. 💖💖
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Beautiful.
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Thank you so much
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This is so nice… wonderful poem to read… you have brilliantly penned the journey from lightning of candle to burning out with no shining… I liked this stanza a lot…
A lone candle is shining
Writing its stories with its own wax,
No one will otherwise know
The tale of its burning life.
Excellent work…
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Thank you so much Ashish. This is one of my favourite stanza too. I am glad you liked this post.
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This is some awesome thinking. I love this! Wonderful ideas!💓
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I normally don’t understand poems.. but here the words are clear n simple..
darkness co exist with light.. without one the other can’t sustain alone..
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Thank you so much. I am glad you like this poem.
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