She was like water
With ripples and waves flowing to a path already made.
He was like a moon
Silent and ever-changing
Making her dance as per his mood.
She was like fire
With flames wild and free, spreading light and warmth wherever she is.
He was like wind
Strong, ferocious and carefree
And can make her flicker at his whim.
She was like stars
Full of shine and sparkle
Brightening and calming the dark sky.
He was like a cloud
Dark and protective
Eager to cover her from peering eye.
She was all calm, kind and foreseeable,
he was all sort of gray and unpredictable.
She is the morning, and he is the midnight.
She is the rain, and he is the desert.
No one can ever think they can be together.
But they are like the sea and land for each other.
Even though they are nearby, they seek each other.
Love is not always perfect and enough, sometimes its intense and rough.
For neither is complete without the other.
This is so so beautiful, I needed to read this today. Your words took me to a dreamy place, such amazing writing!!!!! The flow here is so magical, heartfelt and effortlessly graceful! Well done π€π€
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Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment. I am glad you liked this post. π
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This is really beautiful Yeshu! The overall poem is really sooooooo beautiful. I loved the first two stanza….I read them twice…they were just wow
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The first stanza is my favourite too. β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Beautiful ππππππβοΈ
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Thank you so much ππ
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Soo beautifully expressed!!
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Thanks Akshita. Glad you like it π
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Sheβs everything she needs to be.
Kitna mast hai ye! Waise, what made you write?
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Kal vote tha na mera. So I was thinking of Mamta and Modi πππππ
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πππbig lols
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Lol.. hai na .. i was laughing crazy while writing thatπ
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Diya vote??
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Ji haan. Bilkul diya.
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Gaye Kyu ye situation me??
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Nai jane se koi aur vote de deta mera π
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Han ye bhi hai π
I love my country
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Haha.. me too π
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Magical words. “Love knows no bounds” ππ
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Thanks Ashish. Love is often foolish.
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Welcome. Foolish and blind!
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Totally
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Amazingly written, the contrast, the depth, the words in your writing, were all mindblowing!
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Thanks so much Deepak. Your appreciation means a lot π
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It was a pleasure reading the poem, thanks!
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Beautiful Yeshu ! Very well written … live the flow of the poem and yes I think so too that love is like sea and land … just seeking each other … π
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Hey HS. How are you?.. not seeing you much these days.
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Yes da .. lil busy .. doing fine now after an episode of covid – negative flu … a very close family still needs some help .. so hands full ..
how are you doing ?
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Thankfully you didn’t test positive. I don’t know what’s happening around. Every day the situation is getting worse. In fact this year seems more pathetic than last year.
I hope your relative is not serious and recover soon. Stay strong HS. Sending all the good wishes on the way.
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This is a brilliant piece Yeshu!
It flows capturing light and shadow showing how we need each other and to honor all parts of oursevlves.
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Thank you Cindy. You are right we need all elements in life no matter how different it is from one another.
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You’re so welcome!
Soooo true!! π
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So amazing and heartfelt π₯Ίπ―β€οΈ
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Thanks so much Rishika. It always a pleasure to read your thoughts.
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This is beautifully put together, Exquisitely written.
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Thank you so much. Glad you liked this post.
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Very beautifully expressed, Yeshu. Nature is complex, and so is love. You mingled them so well to put across your feelings. It was a pleasure reading the poem. :))
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Thanks so much Sundaram. You are right both are complex and we can’t live without both of them too. Glad you liked this.
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Lovely poem with a great contrast ππ
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Thanks Aparna. Glad you liked it π
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Beautiful poem on love. Two people so different can fall in love, and be inseparable puzzle pieces of life. Thanks for writing
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Thanks Mayank. Glad you liked it. Love also has its own paradox. And no matter how different or difficult it is, it has its own charm.
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Wow I like the way you connected the two posts of ours
Socrates used to discuss for hours, “What is love.”.
While we don’t know “What is love”, we indeed know its charmπ and utility to sustain the world
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Yeah I just found the similarity of idea in our post. You are right its so difficult to describe love. It means different to each. But definitely its one of the driving force of life.
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You’re a strong woman. Your writing is beautiful as much as you are. Thank you.π
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Thanks Lokesh for such a kind comment.
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βLove is not always perfect and enough, sometimes its intense and rough.β I love this β€οΈ
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I really like when someone mention their favourite part or line from the post. Thanks for taking out time and going through the post Joana β€οΈ
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Can I just sum it up in one word?
It’s beautiful β¨
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And finally you are here. I was wondering where is Rashmi. Love poem is your forte. And if you are saying its beautiful. I am honoured β€οΈπ€
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Yeshhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!
This is so so beautiful π
Concluding lines are soul of this π€
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Anushkaaa I soo missed you and after a long time someone is writing my name like this πππ.
Happy that you like this post. Now just get well soon. β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Super nice. Really enjoyed the thought that differences can be complimentary, too. Thanks for the refreshing thoughts!
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Hey thank you so much. I just wanted to convey how paradoxical and yet passionate love can be. Glad you enjoyed it.
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This is lovely and beautiful writingβ¦ Liked itβ¦
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Thank you Ashish. Glad you liked it
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Beautiful. That’s why there is a certain beauty and attraction in a relationship which has opposite personalities or perspectives. Well penned π
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Thanks Radhika. You are right opposite traits has its own charm. Glad you enjoyed reading it.
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Beautiful imagery !!! π
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Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.
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The last line is a hit. Profoundly weaved contrasts. One high the other low. Creating a balance. Like the heart beats.
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Thanks so much Kritika. I wanted to portray the contrasting elements in one’s personality. Glad it came across well.
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